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Old 11-07-04, 03:08 PM   #1
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quick freestlye...

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aight...quick freestyle over the soldier beat....this is the first ever audio i ever done...first time i even touched a mic...only had it bout 3 days....and only just started usin cool edit....feel free to critise...and tell me how i can improve the quality n shit.....remember..its just a real quick freestyle....for the first ever time....pz

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Old 11-08-04, 03:29 PM   #2
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Old 11-08-04, 03:32 PM   #3
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quality isnt tha greatest...........flow is pretty good......you need to pronounciate ya words better.....delivery is aight
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Old 11-08-04, 03:43 PM   #4
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thnx for the feedback an advice man...im stil tryna figure out how to work cool edit and get quality better an stuff...but yer thnx....pz...uppin
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Old 11-28-04, 08:37 PM   #5
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yea, that was pretty good......... get ur quality up i think too...... and yo, for that collab..... since i got more experience with this audio shit.... u should send me ur verse (send me both the song and just ur voice so i can edit incase its messed). or w/e.... u think of a beat or anythin??
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Old 11-28-04, 10:09 PM   #6
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it sounds like your reading off paper.....


ne way.. quality was ass... but if you were freestylin ... then it was strait...
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Old 11-29-04, 03:53 AM   #7
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Quality is real bad, accent is real apparent, does kinda sound like you're readin off of paper, but if it's a free, then it's good, but it sounds like the vocals were overlapped, which would hurt the validity of it bein a freestyle, stay up, experience and willingness to learn is what gets you far.

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Old 11-29-04, 12:36 PM   #8
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ye thnx for the feedback...still....i did tht the first day i had ma mic and cool edit...and first audio ever.....id not even know wot to do bout ma quality n shit...doin a full track right now tho...so ama try up ma quality n shit....and ill post it soon.....thnx for the feedback again...pz
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