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Old 10-17-05, 02:10 AM   #1
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Diligence (0-1) vs. E.C (1-2)

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Old 10-17-05, 05:41 AM   #2
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PEI's a bitch

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Old 10-17-05, 10:07 PM   #3
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Old 10-19-05, 09:46 PM   #4
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This battle will be EZ`, it's hard not to be confident
Shit, I dont need censorship to take out Explicit Content
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Old 10-20-05, 07:39 AM   #6
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even if ive got writers block i can snipe shots that drop you,
and no i'm not talking about the zits on your face...
........when i say i want to pop you,

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Old 10-20-05, 01:19 PM   #7
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Dilligence - Basically wasted his first line on self-glorifying about how easy it will be to beat E.C and that hes so confident. Second line was also wasted by stating how hes gunna "take out" E.C. You actually gotta throw a punch dawg. Pretend like its the 70's and start swingin.

E.C - First line was another waste of time cause it wasnt hitting your opponent. I can see how you wanted to use it to play your second line off it but it wasnt the greatest setup to do so. Second line was played, zit-popping/gun concepts are commonly used now. Plus if your gunna use a 3-line structure like that be careful. At least you actually threw a bit of a punch tho.

V/E.C.....................
 
Old 10-20-05, 02:06 PM   #8
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its a habbit doing the 3 line bar's i think they are more interesting but thatnks for ya vote man...

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Old 10-20-05, 04:20 PM   #9
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vote: E.C

diligence ya first line was good then when u attempted ah punch, tha wording fucked it up...made it sound so-so, and it lost its effect even tho it was nameplay
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Old 10-21-05, 10:30 PM   #10
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even if ive got writers block i can snipe shots that drop you,
and no i'm not talking about the zits on your face...
........when i say i want to pop you,

Wuzn't feelin 1st line...bassically one of 'em "I could come weak and still own" lines.And being as I post a lot in the cypher,I see that A LOT.And it is annoying for writtens.
And the punch..?...PLAYED.I seen shit about zit/pop from ever since.Hell,i even heard Dr.Dre use one in the chronic album.That's how played it is.

This battle will be EZ`, it's hard not to be confident
Shit, I dont need censorship to take out Explicit Content

ur 1st line sucked..same problem as E.C.
And the punch is played............but so was E.C's....

BUT..all in all...I got to give it to Diligence for comin wit a less played line that wuz a personal...

v/diligence...

Weak battle..
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Old 10-22-05, 12:38 PM   #11
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cheers for the honesty man.....

2-1 me..
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Old 10-22-05, 02:47 PM   #12
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v/ EC

dilligence, that nameplays been done too much already
EC popped pimples is too simple
no rhyme intended
 
Old 10-22-05, 03:13 PM   #13
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This battle will be EZ`, it's hard not to be confident
Shit, I dont need censorship to take out Explicit Content

yup short and sweet nicely done got to the point,

E.C ya punch is played the hell out,
 
Old 10-23-05, 05:41 AM   #14
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if u been here long enoygh you'd realise his was more played than mine....
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Old 10-23-05, 11:14 PM   #15
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E.C wins.
Diligence loses.
 
 


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