yo my rhymes come from my heart/
i'm tryna explain my time in the dark/
nigga wont let me in cuz i aint worth it/
i wont eva lose the oppurtunity to serve it/
this rap game is shit to me and dont mean nuthin to me/
yeah
what is in it for me/
its so scary that i got no real parents/
if i eva saw em i prolly knock em out/
cuz they treated me like shit and garbage/
when i cry i say that aint me/
i got a dream that no one can redeam/
yo as strange as it may seem i will neva not sing/
if it is so strange than got shit to say/
c'mon
nigga i'm not afraid to admit that i'm white/
i'll still rap even if you disagree i luv it inspite/
of the rap game killin my brutha/
i swear i'll kill the mutha who wacked ma brutha/
all i want in life is a good and bueatiful wife/

chorus x2
yo all my life i lived in darkness
i was always scared that one dAY
he might come and take my life away
the devil aint gonna get me neva
i stay wit god fo eva and eva
but i still live in hate and darkness

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yo this is my new work so view it but i aint done yet.

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nice, holla if ya consider a remix to promote ma new ass, go to our battler though.

yo you mean you wanna join in the song holla baq

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yea we should connect on dat, i aint gonna be away for liek to days but when im back ill holla for a collab

tight i post i felt it alot wuts up wit da crew its like u n me n kizza n black majik n da prodigy eva on but neva doin nuttin now...lol....i dunno im jus halucinatin lack of sleep
lol
peep my new shit neva new it turn out dis way

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i liked yo shit dawg, i felt u on it, n yea peep dat shit raw was talkin bout, ne way tite post son

sry man wernt feelin it. Alot of it didn't even rhyme and it was pretty basic, rhyme-wise and technique-wise. You had a few weak multis but that was it.

And "if i eva saw em i prolly knock em out" is from Eminem's Sing for the Moment when he talks about his dad. Elevation needed.

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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yo man i caqn say wut i want cuz no ones stoppin me even you niggas.
but thtanx to all wholeft feed back and that rhyme from em wasnt in mind i came up wit that i didnt steal it i wusnt even thinkin bout it.

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Hey yo Ruffy-nah just playin won't be dissin on you but that was the shit!!! Well see ya on Thursday! MAYBE But ur rappin-that was da bomb!!! i know all about you so I know how you really feel, aight cuz? So peace Beyatch!!!

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wut beyach yeah crazed shy

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lol ok crap but you need some elevating
wordplay not too good
stucture and flow are ok

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...Paramik Fuckin'...

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thanx for allo the feed back

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