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Old 11-18-06, 09:43 AM   #1
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"Free Execution"...a diss...short but sharp

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Beats: 1st beat is Biggie's "Dead Wrong"...2nd beat is MC Lyte's "Paper Thin"

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Old 11-18-06, 11:43 AM   #2
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always loved this beat.... and we know why YOU picked this beat... ur intro adlibs are way toooooo soft, but im pretty sure u did that on purpose, i can still hear them if im expectin them... we know about the quality, but its pretty good for basically not havin a mic.... pretty good presence delivery

beat switchup was pretty weak, and i dont like the new beat, sorry....

and ur flow is still good but it just sounds really weird on this beat, doesnt seem to fit.... i just really hate this beat.......... it seems like u repeated the same lines on this beat... the unibrow shit is basically the same, except u replaced like "straight" with "solid"... its a good line, but u dont needa say it again, hah...... norman bates line, lmao.... this shit was pretty good, but the beat was a hiorrid choice to switch into....

rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237216
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Old 11-18-06, 11:50 AM   #3
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yo this whas WHACK..lol and ure 2wice my age dAWG expect a comeback 2night biatch i got things to do unlike u, u net fag..u still love me nigga? lmao
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Old 11-18-06, 03:06 PM   #4
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not a really big fan of battles and disses...love this beat.

i like the flow and how you deliver everything..unibrow? haha okay. beat switch was real wack. some lines sound like you just add words so it can rhyme..why you keep mentioning the unibrow? not really too many punches that i could notice..

overall this was cool..flow and delivery was real cool on the first verse but after that it kinda sounded weak..
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