this was deep mayne....you could tell this was some real ish........the emotion was crazy mayne..could real feel you on this one..the rhymin was nice..mutlis set it out perfectly..and the structure was awesome....the hook was nice too...

'wool coats to get warm,for the winter..although burn in the summer..
because you keep the coat on..to cover whats under..'

^^that line was hot...some real ish myne..ma favourite line..over all i actually liked reading this piece..u got a knack for this kind of writin..keep em comin mayne..wun

return the favour in my open mic pleases..pz

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171262

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