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Old 01-14-06, 04:59 PM   #8
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very good, u put a lot of emotion and story into it without makin it really long (somethin i have to work on )
u have a lot of multis inside your rhymes which gives the piece good flow
u got great vocab too...
nice drop

RTF on my OM- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219595
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