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02-17-04, 10:30 AM
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...The Death Of A True Friend...
IP: 3DEF 9A9C
The Death Of A True Friend
…Death is the greatest thing in this world… …For when we die we can worry about nothing… …Whom can I trust in this world, to make my feelings survive… …The days are long, and the nights are cold… …So hard living without you, how did I ever get mad at you in life? … … I never deserved to be your friend… …Yet you were there for me, even if it was you I hated… …Forever I will never forget you… …You showed me so much passion in this empty world… …But I waited too long to thank you… …For you were taken away from me too soon… …It wasn’t fair… …But you taught me that nothing is in life… …You have to deal with it and get on with things… …May your soul be blessed among the heavens? … …You have showed me so much… …You will never be forgotten… |
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02-17-04, 04:58 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
That was a nice poem...I lost my 3 yr old brother this summer and this poem was very similar to what I wrote a while back...
*Harley*
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02-17-04, 06:01 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
this is a good example of how u dont notice how much u love some1 til dey gon i really like yo poem keep dropin dem holla
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02-17-04, 07:39 PM
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IP: 3DEF 9A9C
appreciate the feedback. Uppin 1 on this
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02-17-04, 08:58 PM
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IP: ABE7 8185
I like it. Im in process of losing ma nana, im gonna refer to this should the day arise. keep it up bruv.
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02-18-04, 01:43 AM
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IP: 3DEF 9A9C
Mos Def. Thx bro hope ya nana pulls through.
~holla if ya hear me |
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