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TheSinnister 1 16.67%
VitaL 5 83.33%
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Old 03-25-04, 08:33 AM   #1
VitaL
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From: .::NY::.
TheSinnister Vs VitaL

IP: 2386 E339

10 lines...
No D/R
No Recycling
No Hate/Crew Votes
First to 5 Votes
3-0 K|O
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34 WiNS, 8 LoSSeS, 28 Ko'S


"I'll leave u lost in your own world, makin u crazy..
Leave ya ass trapped ina tire like the "Michellin Baby"..
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Old 03-25-04, 08:35 AM   #2
VitaL
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CHeCC....

PoSTiN NeXT PeRioD...

DoNT No SHoW... haha...

ReMeMBeR... iTS Due ToNiGHT
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34 WiNS, 8 LoSSeS, 28 Ko'S


"I'll leave u lost in your own world, makin u crazy..
Leave ya ass trapped ina tire like the "Michellin Baby"..
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Old 03-25-04, 09:14 AM   #3
VitaL
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“Im Untouchable, but im makin you feel me”

IP: 2386 E339



HaHa… YeaH… BeT…

-CLeaRS THRoaT-
I’m whack – no, its not my fault ur names a type-o/
2 N’s instead of one thinking then ya lines might flow/
-CouGHS-

Oh sorry… u think im really startin a verse off like that?

HaHa… CheCC iT…

You should be callin yaself a “delinquent”/
Everyone kno the “deal”, but no one kno where the “ink went”/
Ya times been spent on weak rhymes to vent/
Your emotions are bent worse than a bipolar Vietnam vet!/
Come hit me bacc, I don’t care if u “amped”/
A thousand volts aint shit when its attatched to ur pants!/
You couldn’t see me if we was freestylin in Stockholme/
I’ll decapitate u whit razor punches till u really come “off the dome”/
You claimin u untouchable, well my flow’s industrial/
While you’re developing yours in the lab, I’m already professional/

BlaH… FuCC iT…

HoLLaH aTCHa Boi!
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34 WiNS, 8 LoSSeS, 28 Ko'S


"I'll leave u lost in your own world, makin u crazy..
Leave ya ass trapped ina tire like the "Michellin Baby"..
- VitaL
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Old 03-26-04, 08:45 AM   #4
VitaL
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up...

why u no show for?

fucc it ... i dont care ... post a verse... 10 lines...

get it done... Pz.
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"I'll leave u lost in your own world, makin u crazy..
Leave ya ass trapped ina tire like the "Michellin Baby"..
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Old 03-26-04, 09:35 AM   #5
3rd-Shift
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IP: D2B8 EE3F

yo wat up plz vpte on dis battle tryin to close it out

battle #1 battle #2
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Old 03-26-04, 10:01 PM   #6
SINISTER
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IP: E034 DBC6

Aight i will as soon as i come back from cali aight ill be back on monday


Later playa
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Old 03-26-04, 10:34 PM   #7
SINISTER
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No warning shot bitch!!

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The end of all law 4 shots fired another body falls
I execute the guilty violently //Undercover killing spree //no warning shot
Die motherfucker, die, die // I'll put a bullet between your fucking eyes
Pull the trigger - cock the hammer back //5th shot to the back of your neck
You're not a threat, you're a fucking disease //Eradicate the enemy
Dead body - another crime scene //Blood-stained pavement, chalk outline
Bullet holes you're dead and cold //The end of all law - no warning shot
Die motherfucker, die, die You won't survive, when the bullets start to fly //Protect and serve yourself /ya Dug your own grave, now rot //In that hole decay The murder will never stop -neva a warning shot
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Old 03-26-04, 10:38 PM   #8
L.E
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From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
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A'ight battle...Vital...pretty nice verse...you had some shit in there that was good, and some shit that wasn't great...structure was off...flow's a'ight...nice shit all around. Sinnister...well...I dunno how you got accepted into Class sic...cause that shit was pretty wack. I think you could do better, and you lacking punches and flow in this battle, were your downfall. Don't hold back dawg. Some of these herbs can surprise you.

Vital: 7/10

Sinnister: 4/10

No hate...plz hit this up...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362
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Old 03-26-04, 11:02 PM   #9
SINISTER
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Uppin For Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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Old 03-26-04, 11:24 PM   #10
James West
Flyweight
 
From: PHX
IP: EC0B 84C7

TheSinnister, wasnt feelin it, It seems like that would be good if you were doing a collaberation with gangsta nip or something but I battle, no.

VitaL good verse, I especially liked this bar,

"Ya times been spent on weak rhymes to vent/
Your emotions are bent worse than a bipolar Vietnam vet!/"

but I didnt get this line, maybe Im missing it,

"Come hit me bacc, I don’t care if u “amped”/
A thousand volts aint shit when its attatched to ur pants!/"

But anyhow, Vote goes to Vital.
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Old 03-26-04, 11:34 PM   #11
UnbornRookie
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This one was close. Not either MC's best performance -- i hope.

Vital

punches....4/10
rhyme structure and abilty...3/10
overall rhythm...4/10

12/30...ouch..lol

Sinnister

punches...3/10
rhyme structure and ability...6/10
overall rhythm...4/10

13/30...not much better..but enough for my vote

I'm gonna give this one to Sinnister. Stay up young MC's.

UBR
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Old 03-26-04, 11:38 PM   #12
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From: Denver
IP: AC1E 1E02

weak battle, you guys need to work on personals hard-core, but for flow i got vital, more even lines and easier to read. Opener, vital ruined his with his little cough cough thing, so mine goes to sin. closer i give a tie, not cause they were both good, but both whack, no personals, punches goes to vital, and multies, vital had one i think, and i dont think that sin had any, both need to seriously elevate.

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Old 03-26-04, 11:39 PM   #13
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forgot to drop this, please hit this up

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362
 
Old 03-27-04, 01:33 PM   #14
VitaL
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appreciate the comments... n critique...

i didnt come my best ... no... not at all.. lol

uppin for final votes...
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-=!!OVeRaLL BaTTLe ReCoRD!!=-
34 WiNS, 8 LoSSeS, 28 Ko'S


"I'll leave u lost in your own world, makin u crazy..
Leave ya ass trapped ina tire like the "Michellin Baby"..
- VitaL
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Old 03-27-04, 01:38 PM   #15
Prezident
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yo yeah i give this one to vital im bewildered at how sinnister is a flyweight yet no disrespect but you gotta elevate at least a little i give my vote to vital
vote=vital
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