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Old 07-30-04, 11:49 PM   #1
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Sneak in thru the back with a mac and shit
With clips and an Uzi on the side of my hip
Wavin it, yea that's right, wavin the mac
"Give me the money before i put a hole in yo' ass"
"Give me the money fast before the cops step in the door right there"
"I can't sir, please don't shoot me, i'm scared"
"Come on man i don't need the cops on my ass"
"Don't shoot me i have a wife and kids, you can even ask"
"Just put the money in the bag before i have ta blast"
I hear the sirens, he puts the money in the bag, i let loose and start firin
Have no friends that the cops aren't wirin
They'll soon be dead with the guns i'm acquirin
Only things on my mind are my wife and kids
I never did a crime i aint have ta committ

As i came thru the door
I've said it before
Hit the motha fuckin floor
"It's a robery!"

Runnin thru the streets now, shit has never went this far
Thinkin of a way out, ALL I NEED IS A CAR!
Not an option tho...i need to think fast
I have 10 G's on me and i got the cops on my ass
I shake the pigs and fi-nal-ly on my street
Step on a crack and fall on to the concrete
But adrenaline is pumpin, can't feel pain i endure
Cops never seen me so i hide the guns and money in the trash on the curb
Run in the house and pass out onto the floor
Wake up an hour later thinkin 'i wanna rob another store'

As i came thru the door
I've said it before
Hit the motha fuckin floor
"It's a robery!"

lol.....this is nothin really....i think it sucks....lol....i was just doin it for fun....just haven't been in a rappin mood lately....i dunno....but let me know what you think
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Old 07-31-04, 01:04 AM   #2
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good theme u kept wit da story over all good flow keep doin it holla back
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Old 07-31-04, 05:19 AM   #3
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yeah ruff and i wanted to say this nice battle you won
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Old 07-31-04, 05:45 AM   #4
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Yo it had a nice flow and ya did stick to what ya was chatting bout so overall aite just need bit more complexity aite but keep elavatin........peace.....holla........
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Old 07-31-04, 06:24 AM   #5
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yo nice drop cuz.I'm feelin tha story plot too. keep droppin dos flames an good thangs willl come
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Old 08-01-04, 12:37 AM   #6
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yo nice drop keep it up
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Old 08-01-04, 12:50 AM   #7
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yo man check ma battle wit mc skiltz
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