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07-30-04, 11:49 PM | #1 | |||||||
Detrimental Thoughts
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Robery
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Sneak in thru the back with a mac and shit
With clips and an Uzi on the side of my hip Wavin it, yea that's right, wavin the mac "Give me the money before i put a hole in yo' ass" "Give me the money fast before the cops step in the door right there" "I can't sir, please don't shoot me, i'm scared" "Come on man i don't need the cops on my ass" "Don't shoot me i have a wife and kids, you can even ask" "Just put the money in the bag before i have ta blast" I hear the sirens, he puts the money in the bag, i let loose and start firin Have no friends that the cops aren't wirin They'll soon be dead with the guns i'm acquirin Only things on my mind are my wife and kids I never did a crime i aint have ta committ As i came thru the door I've said it before Hit the motha fuckin floor "It's a robery!" Runnin thru the streets now, shit has never went this far Thinkin of a way out, ALL I NEED IS A CAR! Not an option tho...i need to think fast I have 10 G's on me and i got the cops on my ass I shake the pigs and fi-nal-ly on my street Step on a crack and fall on to the concrete But adrenaline is pumpin, can't feel pain i endure Cops never seen me so i hide the guns and money in the trash on the curb Run in the house and pass out onto the floor Wake up an hour later thinkin 'i wanna rob another store' As i came thru the door I've said it before Hit the motha fuckin floor "It's a robery!" lol.....this is nothin really....i think it sucks....lol....i was just doin it for fun....just haven't been in a rappin mood lately....i dunno....but let me know what you think
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07-31-04, 01:04 AM | #2 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 75DF D0BD
good theme u kept wit da story over all good flow keep doin it holla back
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07-31-04, 05:19 AM | #3 | ||||
$Thug Life$
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IP: 7C6F 690C
yeah ruff and i wanted to say this nice battle you won
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07-31-04, 05:45 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Yo it had a nice flow and ya did stick to what ya was chatting bout so overall aite just need bit more complexity aite but keep elavatin........peace.....holla........
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07-31-04, 06:24 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 3240 794D
yo nice drop cuz.I'm feelin tha story plot too. keep droppin dos flames an good thangs willl come
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08-01-04, 12:37 AM | #6 | ||||
$Thug Life$
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IP: 66F2 AB19
yo nice drop keep it up
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08-01-04, 12:50 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 66F2 AB19
yo man check ma battle wit mc skiltz
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