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08-19-04, 04:34 AM
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This feeling Inside
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Wut im feeling right now:
This feeling came back agen, I just don't really understand it... Its wierd, i dont think it feels like luv? but inside its expandin.. This feeling it doesn't hurt, not even sure if it feels good.... But i feel I need to let go of something, dat i know i should... This girl, my best friend it seems like i knew her forever... Damn, u have no idea i want her n i to be close together... But the chance of that happening, damn its pretty low... But my luv for her won't stop, it just continues to grow... Right now I don't know, I just wanna let go and let loose.. If i could only choose who to luv, then yes her i'd choose.. But once again I can't show it, im here writtin with tears... I think I luv sumwun i knew for 5 months but feels like years.. I guess dats the reason i ain't hungry, the reason i lost wieght.. But like everyone im lonely, but she's wut makes mah life great.. I finally know, I ain't confused, I know wut to do for once.. Imma show her how i feel after i hid it all of these months... I thank the Lord above for finally showing me the right way.. I guess thats wut happens after every night I alway pray... Yes tomorrow imma tell her, just as soon as i see her... Im gonna say, "babe, I luv u, wen i don't see u i get weaker.. When im sick you help me get well and get better... Your who I need, your an angel, your mah treasure.... Hey guys, this is really how i feel, this is true, i just wrote this 10-20 minutes ago, and tomorrow, imma really do it.. plz feed back.. and plz no beef.. |
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08-19-04, 05:20 AM
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Dawg that was a tight spit the structure was decent and even flow was hott nice word usage and in my opinion go for it dawg good luck
 Drop sum feedback on my open mic in ma sig or Drama jus hit my find more posts
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08-19-04, 05:52 AM
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ya man that was dope shit 7/10 keep it up i like yer shit
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08-19-04, 01:52 PM
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Above All Else
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hahahaha, nyce
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08-19-04, 01:57 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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good shit man 7/10 i liked it
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08-19-04, 01:58 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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lol my names dope
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08-20-04, 01:03 PM
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Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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ayo essay, nice ryme. so, if u put that yesterday, then that must mean u told her 2day, or ur goin 2, good luck wif that holmes. oh yeah, nice shit ....man, *ahem*, yeah, 8/10. holla atcha boy homey!! wigity wigity wigity WERD!!
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 REST IN PEACE MY MUTHAPHUKKIN SPICCA OMB!!!
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08-20-04, 03:52 PM
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In ya area.
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Yo man that was some good shit, nice flow and vocab usage, i was feelin' it. Holla back on one of my joints...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138884
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