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10-23-04, 10:19 AM
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***cITYSLICka***
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fuk a TuniT.
IP: D3BC 2245
TuniT.......at first i was like o.k. maybe this dude is just a hard critic.
then i read OneManBands piece on bruce lee which i thought was creative and funny.it was a good piece.then i scroll down and who the fuk is it that had to be the hater.TuniT.Simon from american idol's illegitimate son. it's a lot of hot emcee's out there and I can guarantee  T.U.aiNt.IT] next time b4 u judge my shit bitch ask permission or u'll find urself choptup like chinese half a chickens supposed to be lyve it's ya lifelike ass im kikin then open ya' ches' t' see wat life's like after livin' fukin' wit Grandz..T-unit,dats a bad decision dog my wrath is endless lead to tragic endin's and nobody gives a fuk what ya silly ass is feelin' i tear thru ya stlye like micheal jackson do da ass of children. ****fuk u wit' a dirty dick u hatin' ass muthafuka.i would keep goin' but u ain't worth another
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  I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE Last edited by Loveliss Grandz : 10-23-04 at 10:46 AM. Reason: typo's |
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10-23-04, 10:34 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 9588 E886
Decent verse but i don't get what you were tryna do wit ya structure. Why the:-
next time b4 u judge my shit bitch ask permission or u'll find urself choptup like chinese half a chickens Thats wack^(the structure) next time b4 u judge my shit bitch ask permission or u'll find urself choptup like chinese half a chickens That looks betta^ |
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10-23-04, 10:42 AM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: D3BC 2245
i structure my rhymes the way i say them.I ain't sayin' it like dat so i ain't structure it like dat.good look on da feed 1.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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10-23-04, 10:44 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
oww!!!! I Feel Ya On That One In fact he does it to everyone i think I Think He is simonz son but N E Wayz i Loved someone had to say somethin to light his ass up U Did Great I See no flaws in the flow none in the ryme if u wanted feedback id Give you A 10/10 Keep It Up And Oh Yeah
FUCK T~UNIT YO BITCH ASS HAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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10-23-04, 10:46 AM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: EECF 4742
wats up with the structure????? its aight i guess........... but it was a decent verse, kinda short compared to most, but ok
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10-23-04, 10:50 AM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: D3BC 2245
thx for da feed back.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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10-23-04, 11:09 AM
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...Money Is Everything...
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IP: 66F2 AB19
Simple rhymes. try to make them hard you kno let people kno you really worked on it.
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...You're Gonna Go Down... ...Cuz I'm The Best And Profound... ...Hardcore Ridah Around... ...When I Blast My Shots Are Random... ...Fuck My Foe's I Can't Stand Em... ...Fuck You Where's My Ransom... ...If I Suck Look At The Fans Son... WSK'z Sigg Shop. ^^Satisfaction Garenteed^^
 My Battlez Right Now ~~~Respect List~~~
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I.Mind For$aken Verbal Vision All In A.O.D |
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10-23-04, 11:17 AM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: D3BC 2245
o.k.thx for the feed.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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10-23-04, 11:19 AM
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...Money Is Everything...
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IP: 66F2 AB19
nice i mean aight.
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...You're Gonna Go Down... ...Cuz I'm The Best And Profound... ...Hardcore Ridah Around... ...When I Blast My Shots Are Random... ...Fuck My Foe's I Can't Stand Em... ...Fuck You Where's My Ransom... ...If I Suck Look At The Fans Son... WSK'z Sigg Shop. ^^Satisfaction Garenteed^^
My Battlez Right Now ~~~Respect List~~~
..:Logistic:..
I.Mind For$aken Verbal Vision All In A.O.D |
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10-23-04, 11:55 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
lmao
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10-23-04, 12:27 PM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: D3BC 2245
appreciate the feeds peeps
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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10-23-04, 12:35 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
*shake my damn head*
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