ok i'll pm you with an Idea i have...uppin for feedback

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[certified gangsta]

not bad shit bro. definately sense some wu-tang inspired lyric style. the way u use multis and language reminds me of wu-tang a bit. nice topic u used but i think u could have delivered it better. i didnt really get a message out of this. you should try to get a message across with everything u write not just use words that rhyme to set a scene but yeh you did good here.
7.5/10

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dope open mic...practically everything was on point and wouldnt mind voting this as open mic of january unless somethin better comes along but this was fire...

the message brought out was excellent and good concept, the flow was practically great in all of it except near the end it got a little bit off but theres no reason to bs about that practically the rest was great the vocab was on point it didnt fuck up nothin else it was delivered in all the right times basically everything was good here give it a 10/10 keep doin ya thing

peace

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its talent, good shit, rely on god spy of the eye, u got alpahbet written all over ur teeth, nice open mic maybe u'll see my shit someday late keep it certified, gansta

ya im gonna make january mine....check me out every week with an even sicker opem mic every week...

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hey man u were right it's of the best man u got good structure and rhyming and everthing else hey i'd love it if u return the favor man

dat drop was dope, i liked it, wordplay dats wut i look fo wordplay nice wordplay it flowd good 2 i'd ratd dat 8.5,9/10

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good read i liked it man word

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tahnks for all the feed back....

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upping for feedback...

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[certified gangsta]

weerd this was a good read mic was feelin it you should drop alot more glad to see you bak an droppin fam 8.5/10 easy.....=1=

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oh an hit up my last OM verbal holocoust(The lost keystyles) weerdness........=1=

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