I think this peice is very creative and It was challenging...Im also planning to do it audio...enjoy

yo yo yo yo...

Ayo Adrenaline's an addict to ass-whoopin and arrogance
Badly bustin bastards and breakin outta banishment
this Canadian cat's cappin cold leavin clouded combustion
Dustin y'all debris desperately into dark dirty dungeons
Efficiently eradicatin enemies and endin there equivalence
while Finishin foes and floodin fiends without found fingerprints
Guys keep guessin while im gradually gettin godly gifted
Hissin at hooligans and hurtin harshly but it's hardly hinted
I'm indestructably intense and invented wit immense illness
havin Juvenile jackoffs joltin down hills just like Jack and Jill is
Killin flow's wit keyboards and knifin Knights wit Kryptonite
Leavin loads of lands literally left without a link of life
My main mission mentally misinterpreted by mortal morons
Not knowing nothin cuz these niggas nerves aint normal neurons
im the Only one omnipotent to outnumberin obstacles
any Person pleadin a death plot is plausibly a probable
im Quiet but quick to quarrel wit da queer quite quickly
any Rash response results in a steer quite risky
anything Soudin similar to these sick spits is sarcastic
This kid's about to take the throne usin tools and tank tactics
im an Unknown legend undeniably unpredictable
Vowin to vapourize and vanquish all vermin known visible
just Wastin ur whole wackness and ur wussy whore ways
like Xena im a warrior x'in u like xerox n' X-rays
I got Yip yappin yellow bellies yellin like egg yolks
im Zoned-in, zappin fools zig zaggin like zygotes...

and know y'all know y'all ABC's
so next time y'all can sing wit me...(and try and keep up) lol...

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Unknown Legend...

links:

1) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185527
2) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=188021

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Unknown Legend...

thaat is creative, tight shit man.....i really liked it, nice vocab and structure...just creative....9/10

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Soundclick

damn straight homie....tell me that's not fire...you know damn right that shit's hot...ayo uppin this to the damn top niggaz...dont sleep on dis shit...

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Unknown Legend...

yeah man, i enjoyed this shit, it actually flowed quite nicely....props to ya......the m line was the best because every word but one was an m, lol....i liked the j line the best though, some other hot ones......haha, pretty funny/nice self-glorifyin, lol.....keep up homie, this was hot

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yeah man...ya creative juices are really flowin...good shit fam...9/10

-DB

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uppin...if you dont know your abc's then read them here lol..

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dis was real ill! VERY creative n da flow was on point once i started readin it i started to realllllly get into it lol; good structure n wat not.....

My main mission mentally misinterpreted by mortal morons
Not knowing nothin cuz these niggas nerves aint normal neurons
^^fav lines

good shit homie keep up da good work...1

uppin...dont sleep on dis...

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Unknown Legend...

i didn't leave you a link cuz i had nothing for you to return the favor on.....but can you return the favor on this OM?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=188394

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Soundclick

this was a pretty good drop i liked the way everything flowed good vocab and everything. but i have heard this concept used before on a mixtape a while back but none the less this was still hot.

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this was decent, some of your lines didnt make much sense
though to be honest but alot did, good piece overall....
stay up man......

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

ya i'll return the fav soon fam...

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Unknown Legend...

yo actually your referring to papoose...I heard that mixtape too...and that's where I got inspired to do it...werd

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