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Old 11-13-05, 11:05 PM   #1
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23. Macca vs. 24. Daubs

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Old 11-14-05, 02:35 AM   #2
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yes... checking in. g'luck.
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Old 11-14-05, 01:58 PM   #3
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All the mouth you been giving,

lets see what happens.

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Old 11-16-05, 12:39 PM   #4
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I kill the small frys off first, but then just tackle the bigger
even eating healthy wont help you...when apple the trigger

meh.

drop soon
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Old 11-16-05, 09:00 PM   #5
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Ur punches are as effective as DARE keeping kids of drugs
Like ALWAYS when you suck...... you highlight and cut

there. and if you don't get the punches I feel sorry for you.
start voting.
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Old 11-16-05, 09:28 PM   #6
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Vote - Daubs

.....Macca's didn't even really rhyme
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Old 11-16-05, 09:31 PM   #7
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well good job daubs. you got the first vote.
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Old 11-16-05, 09:35 PM   #8
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v/daubs as well....cuz macca yours really didnt rhyme
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Old 11-16-05, 09:41 PM   #9
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The two guys that posted above me explained very well

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Old 11-16-05, 09:43 PM   #10
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omg. it just didn't rhyme. why don;t you tell daubs what quality he had in his bar. jeez. doesn't rhyme is fucking stupid.
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Old 11-16-05, 09:47 PM   #11
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well we dont have to cuz someone coulda dropped this

your a pice of shit
ill win with one hit

cuz it rhymed this is text....and its a single punch....if it doesnt rhyme it defeats the purpose
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Old 11-17-05, 03:30 AM   #12
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Both were Garbage

But ima go wit Daubs on this 1
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V/ - Daubs

Daubs bar was pretty weak, he had a played concept he worked with and forced his wordplay in the second line with the "apple" part.
Macca, also very weak bar, forced the wordplay, there is no need to capitalise parts of your bars, and also it did rhyme, but not that well, that was the main reason why your bar was so weak, the concept was also played to.
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Old 11-17-05, 06:10 AM   #14
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Daubs Got this both was weak both shoulda came harder sall good though...

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