This was a good piece in my opinion. Chymera verse was cool but was very short compared to Mentalz. And I think u could work on ur verses a little bit more by adding more internal rhyming and multies.But it was nicely structured and the vocab was nice. The flow was also nice. For Mentalz's verse, i thought i was well done the multies were cool and the internals were nice. The topic was very nice also.

My favorite line from Chymera was: "Metal fangs seepin down into gentle stains
as our daughters scream are drowned in cellophane"
^^ that was nice, i really liked that

My favorite line from Mentalz was: Relished from poverty, to boot camp, to 'honor me'
^^ i thought that just flowed really well and i liked how "poverty" and "honor me" rhymed in that line.

Overall nice drop, i give it an 8.5/10. Keep writin ya'll. Peace.
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