very good, u put a lot of emotion and story into it without makin it really long (somethin i have to work on )
u have a lot of multis inside your rhymes which gives the piece good flow
u got great vocab too...
nice drop

RTF on my OM- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219595

Firstly, very well written…something about the way you wrote this, and ended it that makes it very effective – lyrically this was very good, and even though it is short and concise it is perfect for what you wrote about, besides there was still a lot of detail…Vocab was good, flow was great – helped by the many internals too…deep with a perfect feel to it, you are obviously very good at what you do....

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