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10-09-06, 02:33 PM
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Houdini
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Superhero
IP: 1604 9994
I'm a super hero...
Change flicks like robert deniro... Go in the pen and come out still whole... My style is out the door..Even Peace was a no-show In a battle I can for sure bring the text back Laid back in the Caprice...Bitch Im the next mack I get in heads I destroy all ego's Its a federal offense to kill me...like bald eagles I open doors and slam them behind quickly So many enemies..even the sidewalk trips me Fuck wreckage This is the sideshow kid Find me walking beside your bitch... Fuck you hoe's I aint in to Little kids That constantly be running they mouth...Not knowing what a sideshow is.. I bring Violence, ,Cuz bullets tell the truth I'll knock you back to a newborn So u can renew your youth
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10-09-06, 04:39 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
2 links or this will be closed.
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10-10-06, 03:16 AM
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Houdini
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IP: 4EB2 294C
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234974
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235023
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10-10-06, 01:34 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 4193 492A
I liked it, This probably won't mean much coming from an RV Rookie, But ay? Hu cares
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10-12-06, 12:33 AM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 5043 32F4
Some pretty cool lines in their dude, the gun ish was mad bullshit, dude ya fakin lol. But the flow is hot and theres a few witty lines there. Some creativity being shown on this. Not really a story this seems just like a quick write up and slap together thing so meh for the imagery on it. The vocab is weak but that didnt matter cuz this was a short piece with a short meaning. Anyway decent job dude, keep it up.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235871
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10-13-06, 01:42 PM
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Houdini
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IP: C0C4 14C0
Thanks for the feedback...Uppin this
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10-22-06, 02:50 PM
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Houdini
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IP: 1604 9994
uppin this. where is all the feedback
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10-25-06, 11:39 AM
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++ON TOP++
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IP: 6D77 93CD
this was ight, shawty ya flow was pretty good, and there were some decent punches in there.
I get in heads I destroy all ego's Its a federal offense to kill me...like bald eagles ^^^that was probably my favorite bar out of the whole joint.... stay up homie...return the favor on my shit...the links r in the sig |
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