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07-06-07, 10:58 AM | #1 | |||||
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1st Keystyle
IP: 20CD 5579
1st Keystyle On This Site....Lets Get It In...
Listen As I Proceed To Spit Rhymes, Cock And Clip Nines... They Step Back When I Spit Mines, My Barz Hit To Hard They Just Split Minds... Seriously... I'm Bout 2 Rip These Fools To Shreds, I'll Lyrically Sadomize... I Drop 'Bombs' And I Enjoy It, Like I Was Lookin Thru 'Saddams~Eyes'... I'm Tryin 2 Bring Life To Hip-Hop, So Prepare For War... '9's And Mac 11's.' I Got 'Steel~Numbers', Now That's A 'Metal~4'...(Metaphor) Could I Possibly B The Best Nigga Here, Well Why Not... They Could Never Win, Kuz They Missin 'One~I', Like 'Cyclops'...(Get It) Ok Time 4 Sumthin More Betta... I Kno U Bitches Is Feelin Me, Kuz I'm Superior Physically... U Not Betta Than Me Mentally, So How Can U B Betta Lyrically... I'm Lookin Thru Vivid~Eyes, I Could Feel Their Lyrics~Demise... As I Can See Thru The Restless Souls, Of Timid~Guys... Watch As I Proceed To Break~Whores, Rip And Break~Jaws... I'll Lyrically 'Kill', So I Metaphorically 'Break~Laws'... Im Betta Than Ya Average Concept, I'll 'Illusion' Ya Verse, So I 'Con~Texts'...* They Mad Kuzz I Bomb~Jects, I'm Done Here, I'm Just To Complex... FEEDBACK WOULD BE MUCH APPRECIATED... O Yea Free Agent So If Anyones Interested...Holla At Me... *Illusion=They Don't Exist Compared To Mines, So I'm Connin Ya Verses
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07-06-07, 03:57 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 20CD 5579
Good Lookin Man, I'm Appreciate It....And Nah I Aint Got Audio Yet...But If U Do Text Then I'm Definately 4 A Collab..Just PM Me Or Sumthin Let Me Kno What's Up
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07-07-07, 09:43 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 26FC 8E94
i never post any of my proffessional shit on here,only my have ass quick throw together shit..
^^^^^^^^^^^ true...same here chalk.....less i feel like gettin serious..... anyways.......good shit F@M3-Iz .......everything was on point punches multis etc....keep it up ~1~ |
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07-09-07, 12:39 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 20CD 5579
Appreciate It KM....But Anybody Know How To Put The Links Up...Kuz I'm On A Sidekick and I Don't Kno How To Do It From This and I Don't Want My Post Bein Deleted And Stuff
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300 Junior Gunnerz *~FiNeSt OuT~* Vote On My Battles...Bitches |
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07-09-07, 04:03 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 26FC 8E94
u gotta give feedback to other post ....at least 2.....then use those links and post them up next to yours so it dont get closed up.....~1~
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=243063 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=243099 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=243041 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=243074 |
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07-11-07, 12:51 AM | #7 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 2350 449F
shit was sick i liked the wordplay and punches nice drop n keep hot peace
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07-11-07, 01:24 PM | #8 | |||||
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IP: 20CD 5579
Thanks KM...Here's My Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3175270 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3175270
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07-19-07, 03:34 PM | #9 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 511E 3A39
eh not bad...... delivery of the wordplay could use some touchin up, i see ur point but the delivery needs some polishin, some played concepts here and there but yo i see ur just elevatin like everyone else
i like ur structure, although nothin new at least its solid cyclops line was coo metal four line was kinda forced.....u couldve been like..... i aint rappin here, ur broad loves fuckin me yea thats what i Meta-for(met her for) rest was either basic or played..... coo flow tho..... try watchin tv if ur lookin for concepts and tryin to be a lil original..... ps i acknowledge it was a keystyle so big ups for producin that |
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07-29-07, 03:55 AM | #10 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: D657 40A2
this was tight...
the word play was good |
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07-29-07, 03:55 AM | #11 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: D657 40A2
and vocab
i like it |
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