i've stepped out of my shadow, proclaim im ILL when i battle
isane lyricist leave your emcees shaking like baby rattles
called me ILLness ways i spit nonsense and you feel this
put up a fight with me,so i put my fist right were ur face is
snipe ya chest from a distance and rip your vest
go ahead spit ur best,i'll punch u so hard that ur soul will jump out of ya flesh
clash you threw the ground like my fist weighted 1,000 pounds
rock a krown ,ill snatch it and make you eat dirt out of the ground
i'll rip threw ur corpses,well im creative called me methaphorses
i key this nonsense that take over your mind by unknown forces



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uppin for some feed back

i thought it was ok mang. desent flow and vocab. it painted a good picture.keep it up

good shit for 2 min

good punches

not too many metas

good vocab keep that shit up.

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ight thanks for the feed back uppin

Yeah this was alright i thought.....you had some good metas in here i thought, pretty decent....structure was alright could have been a bit better but still good.....flow was good i thought, stayed on mostly, fell off a bit but nothing big...but overall this was alright keep at it.

yup it was ok
decent flow
decent vocab
decent overal

hit up my sig with feed back

ight thanks for all the feed back uppin once again

Yea, it was straight. Topic kinda used up, but played well.
Nice meta's and a decent flow hommie, should have made it longer, I like those type of reads. But nice drop overall hommie.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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ight thanks alot high class uppin for more feed back

yo for two minutes that was a real nice verse right when i started reading it i felt it you know but that was real nice for two minutes can u hit my verse up called "underpriveledged"thanks man keep it up