Voted For: mookie

props to both here's the verdict.

nomercy-
Ill spit a harder noun every time and then come out like I was victorious/
Cuz im a glorious motha fucka, prob scared you cuz I rap like notorious b.i.g/

this didn't seem to rhyme and it was your first two lines. This is bad, it makes a person want just to give you the L, since you came out not rhymin, or not making sense. your structure was bad throughout, and at other points you didn't rhyme

so for better structure, and only slightly better lyricism, mookie gets this one. elevation for you both though, no diss, keep at it.

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cmon yall we need some votes

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Voted For: mookie

MOOK U TOOK THIS ONE PLAYA YOUR PUNCHLINES TOOK HIM OUT

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uppin

Voted For: NoMercy

OK YOU GOT ALRIGHT PUNCHES VOCAB WAS GOOD BUT THE LINES WERE EXTENDED YOU NEED TO CUT THEM DOWN A LIL BIT V MERCY 5/10 FOR BEEING 13 THAT OK IVE SEEN BETTER BUT IT SUCKED FOR BEING A BATTLE IN GENERAL IT RHYMED BUT HAD NO FLO SO MY VOTE GOES TO MERCEY

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shawdy i got all these peeps voting for me but it dont count explain yall votes

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Voted For: mookie

ok quick tip to both:

-no gun rap wins battles,be sure of this-
-not even outside battles-i do those too-

_another thing-dont use self glory at ALL-
-and age jokes also-

but stil Mookie still takes it

(i feel stupid everytime i say his name)
but i guess his punches were better
but flow doesnt win it here
but No Mercy had mostly self glory 4 real

so M wins it lol
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144192
return the favor no hate please

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well then that was a gay vote pretty even battle uppin

Voted For: mookie

I gotta give this battle to mookie. His punches hit harder...and his flow was abit better. The other person had no punches and it didn't seem like a battle verse.

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if we didnt have to explain our votes i wouldve won plz explain yall votes

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we need votesppep cmon ill hit ya back peace

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Voted For: mookie

Mook: You won because you attempted punchlines, and actually went at mercy, Mercy had glorification lines all over the place....and then his opener didnt rhyme...
so...

v/Mookie

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Voted For: NoMercy

no mercy took it...betta vocab...betta structure...betta flow...betta punch...beta wordplay too...it was close...but this 1 goes to no mercy...

gave it to no mercy...