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Skriptz 4 44.44%
KhAoZ ThEoRy 5 55.56%
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Old 05-26-05, 09:32 AM   #1
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Voted For: Skriptz

Nice battle. Khaoz had a nice verse. good structure and punchlines. skriptz had better punches and his creativity was better. skriptz won this battle. but it was a close call. fav line:
'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself

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Old 05-27-05, 12:22 AM   #3
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Skriptz - The flow was allright,with a good structure. I have seen harder punches from you, but you came pretty good enough for the win in this battle. Not really any personals, cept for the punch with the welcome link..The vocab was meh, and the wordplay was allright...

KhAoZ ThEoRy - Pretty good drop...The structure is allright....The punches were pretty good, but most of them were played out, and I have seen them before...The fender wordplay was pretty hot...if you woulda came a bit harder with all your punches you coulda won...

vote: skriptz...just came harder
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Old 05-27-05, 09:34 AM   #4
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Old 05-27-05, 09:39 PM   #5
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Old 05-28-05, 10:10 AM   #6
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lol this was a real close battle ihad to read each verse twice to make sure...

imma break it down...

sik wit it:

i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
^^ nice opener decent wordplay 7/10
u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
^^ lol nice 7/10
There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
^^ not feelin this one 5/10
Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
^^ doesn't rhyme 4/10
I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself
^^ ok closure couldav ben harder 5/10

ok i felt your verse wasn't as good as it couldav been... u sarted off wit some dope punches and then u started to come less consistant giving you the loss... u just need to stay consistant in your battles and then u'll be good....

28/50

khaoz:


Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked
^^ good opener and wordplay 7/10
HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender''
EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender
^^ nice again 8/10
Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
^^ ok i spose 5/10
Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''
^^ haha dope wordplay 7/10
Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out''
Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out''
^^ not really feelnig this one 4/10

overall i felt u came hard in this battle you had some dope wordplay and i enjoyed reading your verse you had some lines that made me laugh lol... just try to keep those punches gonig all the way through and you'll be sorted

31/50

im giving this to khaoz for havingt better wordplay and punches... keep droppen em homies no hate pz....
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Old 05-28-05, 10:57 AM   #7
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Old 05-28-05, 11:01 AM   #8
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lol bno way is it 4-1 sik wit it has got mad d/r lol your verse was better than his
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Old 05-28-05, 11:05 AM   #9
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^lol mad d/r's? yea right...i'll let that one stay e.c

u just got mad cuz i voted against u...nuttin much tho
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Old 05-28-05, 11:08 AM   #10
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na man i aint botheerd u voted against me tht dont bother me i just felt that khaoz stayeds consistant if u had another decent punch in there then u wouldav got it its like u dint try at the end u get me ? aint no hate vote so dont even be sayin that ashit
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Old 05-28-05, 03:27 PM   #11
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Old 05-28-05, 07:12 PM   #12
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Old 05-29-05, 12:18 AM   #13
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Old 05-29-05, 09:29 AM   #14
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Old 05-29-05, 10:53 AM   #15
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Voted For: Skriptz

Sik Wit It -
You hadda consistant verse, punches were creative and witty & they all landed pretty well. The flow got knocked a few time`s through ya verse. But you had one weak bar which was..
u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
I really wasn`t impressed nor feeling this. But at least you compensated w/ harder bar`s.
So I'mma give you 65`%.

Khaoz Thery -
Decent drop, you coulv`e worded ya punches a bit better. Flow as avergae and you had a bit of wit thrown in there. You just need to set ya punches up better. Coz` a few lines were played. But overall ya drop was just decent.
Overall I'mma give you 45`%.

No hate yo.
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