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Old 05-25-06, 07:17 PM   #1
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They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,
Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink

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You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On

^^^
i mean if the rest of troops verse was like his closer he may have had a chance but as it stands N.Tavarez got this with some ease

not an increadibly hot bout but i dig both styles

v/n tavarez
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Old 05-25-06, 04:18 PM   #2
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They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,

Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas

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You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On

V/hot......this was a good battle both came wit some good punchs and wordplay i felt N.T had a more consistent verse he had better personals
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Old 05-25-06, 06:45 PM   #3
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They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded
But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,
And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke
Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas

VS.

I bet you Wrote ya Battle at School and got suspended for Cussin
Ill Smack u wit a "Taco" and Ring ya "Bell"
And go 2 Jail...........For attempt Murder of Eddie Guerrero's Cousin
You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On


Right, I've seen a few people comment on the played concepts... so fucking what, everything is played nowadays.. but if it still makes you laugh then it is decent. Those are the bars I quoted, ones that made me laugh. N.Tav started real strong with some nice bars, fell off towards the end but the Troops overseas line was dope. Troop dropped pretty weak, that last bar was decent but his best one was the eddie guerrero's cousin line... i don't know why, it just made me laugh to the point where I almost fell off my seat. It was the funniest bar of the battle to me, I must have a strange sense of humour.

But anyway, Tav was way more consistent and takes this battle easily.

V/ - N.Tavarez
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Old 05-25-06, 07:53 PM   #4
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Tav had some decent nameplays, that were enough to take this down.

They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas

VS

Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle

Even that is borderline^


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Old 05-25-06, 09:14 PM   #5
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They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded
But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,
And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke
Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas

vs.

Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle

Smashed, I laughed from the first half of Tav's verse sorry Troop but you didn't show up for this, prolly woulda been better no showin

Vote - N. Tavarez
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Old 05-25-06, 10:35 PM   #6
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Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas

vs

Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle

Troop came a little weak then i thought...i mean this should've been a real good battle but it just came out that N. Tavarez just came basically better...

v/N. Tavarez
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Old 05-25-06, 10:40 PM   #7
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They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded
But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,
And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke
Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas

VS.

You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On

wow, troop didn't even come as hard as I thought he would. this was basically a walk in the part for hot. he got this pretty easy. Troop came decent, but not enough for the victory.

v/N.Tav
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Old 05-26-06, 10:25 AM   #9
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They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,
And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke
Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas

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You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On

Eh..

v/ hotshh!
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Old 05-27-06, 03:40 AM   #10
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Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas
What you expected, warm hugs? these kicks stick to your ribs now
He'll hit the Bricks fast enough to knock Redmans crib down
And Happy Birthday, but dont post none of those rhyme lines, fool
Or I' ma give this 20/20....... like Prime Time News
i didnt get that bully on the rocks line... i'd say this battle prolly wasnt hot's best shit but we got some decent wordplay out oof it. best linie to me was the redman line. haha lol brick city in this bitch *i dont think some ppl got the wordplay but w/e*
i JUST got the 20/20 line upon my 2nd time reading this battle, good shit. overall, i see the effort put it and im a fan of lyrics and wordplay so i'll say this was a good verse. not ur best, but good.'

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Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle
You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On
honestly, i expected a bit more from troop. he started off good with some original delivery, but then his verse kinda drifted back to that like 04 rapverse type shit with simple similies as punchesc like the "fucked and burned" line... i've seen this concept before.... delivery and all. some parts of ur battle show elevation but other parts dont, so i'll say just be more consistant witht the dope shyt and you'll come out on top but i have to say this one goes to hot basically for more quotables... both verses were decent and the quoteables were all about equally raw... so i hadda just choose who had more quoteables which is Hotshh...
V/ N Tavarez
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Old 05-27-06, 02:36 PM   #11
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They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,
And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke
Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH
Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas

vs.

nothing...

murder.

v/tavarez
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Old 05-28-06, 03:10 AM   #12
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N.Tavarez wins.

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Old 05-28-06, 03:12 AM   #13
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Old 05-28-06, 03:17 AM   #14
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