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01-31-06, 01:22 AM
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IP: 1CD5 0806
Went really well with the beat I'm listening to. Overall this was a decent piece, I'm really getting sick of suicide and ish for endings, but it's whatever. Flow was straight, vocab fit it, overall a decent piece. Nothing special, nothing bad.
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01-31-06, 07:10 PM
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IP: CCF3 0222
Wasnt a suicide ending, it's fairly open in my opinion. Thanks for the feed Rev.
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02-02-06, 05:27 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
this was a good piece i was it was longer but it still was a good piece Nice vocab and some good multies this was right to tha point and very thought out
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02-05-06, 10:46 AM
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IP: EAB0 D6BA
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Straight up yer, honestly, thats sick. serious man...just like, spice it up more
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02-05-06, 10:55 AM
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IP: EAB0 D6BA
wat made u think of this
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02-16-06, 05:36 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: 8A34 86DE
Uppin for some feed.
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02-19-06, 10:55 PM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
I liked it man..
Sweet flow with a great use of vocab.. Dope imagery man, really lovin' it.. Nice piece, keep droppin.. |
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02-20-06, 07:43 PM
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IP: DE77 123E
shit was madd dope id give it a 8/10
Some days the sun rays shine down on his presence And the light from the night always comes with a lesson But it's time for confession, & he isn’t ready to face it So he remains complacent on steps outside of his basement Tries to erase him as he revises his statements Comprises his cards right on up threw his Ace's To his graced talents to valiant passions for violence Though misguided he'd assured his conscience enlightened ^^^^^^^dope nice read keep droppin |
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02-20-06, 10:12 PM
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IP: 85BE FE9C
good drop dope part that i liked was
But it's time for confession, & he isn’t ready to face it So he remains complacent on steps outside of his basement Tries to erase him as he revises his statements Comprises his cards right on up threw his Ace's |
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05-15-06, 05:33 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: 8A34 86DE
Since I dont have time to write anymore and I still want some feed on this.
Uppin.
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05-24-06, 12:46 AM
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IP: 9080 4ADA
Jesus Christ. this is the first piece that i've seen where i've been like, whoa someone who impresses even SkYLL. this is elite. dope shiz right here.
concept - dope flow - perfect internals - ILL - first i've seen that does them right. multis - ok metas - good vocab - dope overall - 10/10 i will keep my eye out for you, i was beginning to believe this site was a waste.....
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