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MaRVJay1009 2 28.57%
Black Queen 5 71.43%
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Old 01-15-05, 06:14 AM   #7
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Voted For: Black Queen

i love you boththis was a dope battle for real its down to line for line so here goes
MARV
ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"
LIL STRECHED FLOW WORKED THOUGH DOPE NAME PLAY AND PUNCH HERE A 9/10
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"
OK GOOD PUNCH AGAIN BUT MADDDDD STRECHED HERE 5/10
she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"
LOL GOOD META WORDPLAY REAL ORIGINAL 6/10
yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"
LMFAO IT DONT SAY THAT LOL STILL FUNNY PERSONAL 7/10
u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe
I SEE STROBE ALOTBUT ANYWAYS GOOD META KINDA OF PLAYED THATS BEEN SAID BEFORE JUST NOT EXACTLY THE SAME A 5/10
32/50
GOOD VERSE THE LAST BAR BEING PLAYED AND YOUR LINES ARE STRECHED HURT YOU A LITTLE BUT DOPE PUNCHES AND DISSES HERE AND NICE FLOW EXCEPT THAT HAND SHAKE LINE

BLACK QUEEN
He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
OK DOPE PUNCH HERE ITS BEEN USED THE CONCEPT BEFORE BUT IT WAS WORDED NICELY HERE AND HIT PRETTY GOOD 8/10
This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
HAHAHA DOPE PUNCH HERE ALSO NICE NICE 9/10
Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
DAMN ANOTER HARD ASS DOPE PUNCH HERE ALSO NICE NICE 8/10
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows
OK NOT DOPE DECENT PUNCH A LIL STRECHED 5/10
Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with
OK ENDER HERE NOT GREAT BUT OK 5/10
35/50

OK BLack QUEEN GETS MY VOTE EVEN THOUGH YALL TIED IN PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND VOCAB WAS EVEN QUEEN HAD A BETTER STRUTURE AND FLOW MARV YOU HAD WAY TOO MANY STRECHED LINES HERE AND THAT HURTYOUR SCORE BLACK QUEEN CAME MAD HARD TO START WHILE MARV WAS GOOD ALL THROUGHOUT BUT THIS WAS CLOSE AND CAME DOWN TO EVERYTHING AND QUEEN LED I THE OTHER AREAS AND THAT GOT HER MY VOTE MARV WORK ON NOT STRECHING YOUR LINES SO MUCH EVERYTHING ELSE IS PERFECT GOOD BATTLE TO YOU BOTH

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. D-Iced = Cali. Marvjay1009 had blacklisted Cali from voting in his battles. Vote removed
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