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Old 03-01-06, 08:54 PM   #1
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Old 03-02-06, 12:23 PM   #2
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aight i noticed u aint getting any feed either so ima feed you

no way u gonna spit to the eva essence track??? haha lets see

oh nvm lol. u start right off him i expected a intro.
u sound black in the first verse for some reason lol. not tryna offend u or some shit
hook is decent. second verse seems better. like at one point u have this constant rhythm that sounds real tight. aight third verse. okay mike b, someone else, now i get it lol. cause see u didnt mention this was a collabo. his flo is nice so is yours, i think yours is a little better. overall its a dope track
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Old 03-02-06, 01:01 PM   #3
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i'm middle verse and hook sorry thanx
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Old 03-02-06, 04:38 PM   #4
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fuckin sleepin.
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Old 03-02-06, 05:34 PM   #5
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all you emcees came nice........person in the middle edged everyone else just a bit though.......


like that beat man...real nice....

i like the chourous....the emotion on the verses are real nice..hyped, but calm....nice nice..

keep it up on the up and up

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Old 03-02-06, 06:29 PM   #6
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ok first verse...got a decent flow but the voice has very little emotion...if he had sum more emotion it woulda been koo, lyrics wasn't bad....hook was decent if ya had made it wetter an had sum addlibs supporting it, you woulda been koo...ok 2nd verse, flow was koo but u held same flow a bit too long...but u did change it up...an delivery was better than first, lyrics was ok....3rd verse was same as 1st verse but it had a lil more energy...overall it was a good track that could use sum touching up but def a decent listen....stay up........1
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Old 03-02-06, 11:49 PM   #7
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ayo j summers can u feed my audio man. peeps sleepin on my shit too since i aint been droppin audios on this site either

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Old 03-05-06, 02:07 PM   #8
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k word up up uup
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Old 03-06-06, 12:06 PM   #9
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shits tired fuckin up
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Old 03-08-06, 04:21 PM   #10
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ya'll fuckin kidden me letta playa get some feedback damn
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Old 03-09-06, 06:57 PM   #11
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word bumpin yo

first verse pretty nice lyrically
thing i aint like was dudes emotion, wasnt really there honestly
kinda affects his delivery too
but his flow str8

your verse was hot though
ya delivery nice i thought it fit the track nicely
ya flow coo on this, ive always liked ya flow though
lyrically its good
overall solid verse

3rd verse was basically same as 1st, i think it was same guy

hook was OK, i thought it couldve been better
it was jus kinda...boring? i think it couldve used maybe a lil more emotion or suttin, since the beat sound a bit harder

word overall its solid man keep it up
peep that new MAS joint
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