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03-01-06, 08:54 PM
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!!easy Come, Easy Go!!!
IP: E8B4 945F
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223393
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223378 EASY COME EASY GO
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03-02-06, 12:23 PM
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IP: 1DB0 47F5
aight i noticed u aint getting any feed either so ima feed you
no way u gonna spit to the eva essence track??? haha lets see oh nvm lol. u start right off him i expected a intro. u sound black in the first verse for some reason lol. not tryna offend u or some shit hook is decent. second verse seems better. like at one point u have this constant rhythm that sounds real tight. aight third verse. okay mike b, someone else, now i get it lol. cause see u didnt mention this was a collabo. his flo is nice so is yours, i think yours is a little better. overall its a dope track
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03-02-06, 01:01 PM
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IP: E8B4 945F
i'm middle verse and hook sorry thanx
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03-02-06, 04:38 PM
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IP: E8B4 945F
fuckin sleepin.
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03-02-06, 05:34 PM
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IP: BF52 4920
all you emcees came nice........person in the middle edged everyone else just a bit though.......
like that beat man...real nice.... i like the chourous....the emotion on the verses are real nice..hyped, but calm....nice nice.. keep it up on the up and up peace
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03-02-06, 06:29 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3842 F0D2
ok first verse...got a decent flow but the voice has very little emotion...if he had sum more emotion it woulda been koo, lyrics wasn't bad....hook was decent if ya had made it wetter an had sum addlibs supporting it, you woulda been koo...ok 2nd verse, flow was koo but u held same flow a bit too long...but u did change it up...an delivery was better than first, lyrics was ok....3rd verse was same as 1st verse but it had a lil more energy...overall it was a good track that could use sum touching up but def a decent listen....stay up........1
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03-02-06, 11:49 PM
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IP: 1DB0 47F5
ayo j summers can u feed my audio man. peeps sleepin on my shit too since i aint been droppin audios on this site either
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223448
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03-05-06, 02:07 PM
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IP: 96F2 DF03
k word up up uup
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03-06-06, 12:06 PM
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IP: 96F2 DF03
shits tired fuckin up
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03-08-06, 04:21 PM
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ya'll fuckin kidden me letta playa get some feedback damn
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03-09-06, 06:57 PM
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IP: BA87 A0AC
word bumpin yo
first verse pretty nice lyrically thing i aint like was dudes emotion, wasnt really there honestly kinda affects his delivery too but his flow str8 your verse was hot though ya delivery nice i thought it fit the track nicely ya flow coo on this, ive always liked ya flow though lyrically its good overall solid verse 3rd verse was basically same as 1st, i think it was same guy hook was OK, i thought it couldve been better it was jus kinda...boring? i think it couldve used maybe a lil more emotion or suttin, since the beat sound a bit harder word overall its solid man keep it up peep that new MAS joint
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