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08-03-04, 10:17 PM | #1 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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Look I’m into this bling thing so I see ices with devices
IP: 005F B7E2
Look I’m into this bling thing so I see ices with devices
That shines like the sun funny how they design some, a cri-sis If a thug lose his jewels like JAROO did, feel small like mice is See mean between lines and spit obscene rhymes for the public Like candidates in debates over economy but politics is the subject Got a love it being a thug legit On my status the crowd stay at us need apparatus such as Microphones and CD’S, in towns Roams as VIP’S playing jazz Be strong in flow and ski on snow like the ice capade in A nice parade during the Olympic wants the gold when I win |
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08-03-04, 11:27 PM | #2 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
hey uo wanna topicial battle me? ill set it up
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08-04-04, 01:00 AM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 59B3 099F
^- lol @ Thats Kat For Asking To Battleing In This Kids Open Mic.. haha.. Anyway... Flowed Good, Structure Was Ok, Concept Was Played, You Should Rhyme About Things People Dont Often Talk About, Like Current Events, Or Shit That You Gotta Get Of Ya Chest, Cuz Everbody Rappin Talking Bout Ice' Cars' N Shit When They Got A Plated Gold Chain And Some Broke Down Whip... So Be Original Cuz You Flow Decently In Some Parts.. Peace.. Hit Up My Key'
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08-04-04, 01:45 PM | #4 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 005F B7E2
thanks for the props for real yall
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08-04-04, 01:55 PM | #5 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 9FB7 7C10
That was alright I give it a 6.5/10
Hey could you check my Open Mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139480 |
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08-04-04, 10:12 PM | #6 | |||||
.::Blood Up::.
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IP: E788 2826
6/10 not bad nice flow
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08-05-04, 01:13 PM | #7 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 005F B7E2
thanks to everyone for props and critique
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