Some new trouble starts but it ain't the red or blue/
who gon die next? could be me or you/

A young foo said sumthin bout an OG in his hood/
he didn't realize behind him was where da OG stood/

gunshots reigned out, as we all anticipated/
young dude was hit, almost decapitated/

ppl screamed as they heard the hammer pound/
chaos spread cuz a dat one simple sound/

only the fake ran, as we stood our ground/
da OG saw only me, when he turned around/

i hit him in da jaw, made his pussy lips bleed/
like a chick on her rag, when i can't plant my seed/

da cops came outta nowhere, one hit me wit his billy/
i said the fuck the police, & whipped him wit my nine milli/

eazy woulda been proud if he could hear dat line/
but we all know his story and dat was mine/

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what y'all think...i dont really think it's great but hey...first timer here..gimme sum feedback

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uppin fo my homey, werd

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R.I.P. EAZY-E

Nice Mayne Structure Was nice flow was nice but then you lost me on "I Couldnt plant My seed'' Line But N E Ways Id give ya a
8.5/10 KEep It Up

that wuz dopeness

Good Nice Flow Good Vocab

U Took Me Off At Some Parts Like King~dipset Said

But It Was Nice Homie

Give Ya 8/10 Word Nice Vocab

Put An Feedback In My Open Mic Tha Lightning

Plz I'll Preciated Homie Thanks Keep Doing Ya Thang

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i liked it holmes, i give it a 8.5/10, good shit essay

Yo man like others said up the vocab, other than that flow, structure, all that was decent.

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