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Old 09-20-05, 11:33 PM   #1
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Welcome Back, Lady Fiya...

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Left Feed on Hella Tracks, but here's a few...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208943
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207381
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205226

I'm in a whole new transition. I been elevating these past months with riding beats, fixing flow problems from the past, learning how to engineer/mix my own tracks, and what not... Hope y'all see the growth from my oldest shit to this one.

This Track is called Tip The Bottle Up for my mixtape, this is my verse... I'll post the full Wild Wunz track when Laidback record’s his over, and 151 records his verse and the chorus..

If you a hater, then go ahead and post. I appreciate the time y'all spending on me.




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All Vocals Done By Lady Fiya
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Beat/ A Mi Amado (Album)

--I leave feed on the majority of tracks on this site, I'd hope I'd get some feed good/bad in return. Thanks much.
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Old 09-20-05, 11:40 PM   #2
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Whats good Ma, i see you spittin it raw like i said on aim this was fast....lol Twista style....Adlibs u lowered it nice..it sounds lil betta than u showed me on aim emotions are aite...mic presence indeed you improved on that ....

hahaha nice A.I
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Old 09-20-05, 11:48 PM   #3
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the beats pretty cool.. the quality is good.. not best.. but not worst.. the lyrics is tite.. but ur flow seems sorta forced.. ahh iono how to explain that lol.. but lyrics are good as hell.. flow is good.. jst a lil. yeah.. well iono.. but yeah.. the dubbing is off a little.. but its cool.. good job though since this is the first track i've heard from u lol
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Old 09-20-05, 11:50 PM   #4
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feelin the beat....

im really likin how u came in.......delivery is good....your stacked vocals soundin good....flow is on point pretty well....damn this is a hot track for real.....you added to the beat tremendously in my opinion....good job
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Old 09-20-05, 11:51 PM   #5
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@ Dabatos, forced? eh i guess lol... i wrote this months ago can say it backwards and forwards.. i think i know what you mean. I record it all once through, no punch-ins... that's prolly why i sound like that, but thanx fa the feed.
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Old 09-21-05, 12:53 AM   #6
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OMG You sound like shawnna. Voicewise

Aight now the beat like I told you sound like some sega game. I like it tho.. The flow in this was strait, never went on and wasn't all abc. Lyrics made me a bit scared of you though. Delivery was good too, usually when I listen to shit from RV they always have a bad quality about them that stick out. Nothing was bad with this. Except you should make it longer. If they play this in the club niggas gon' be disapointed don't ya think. Where did you get the beat?
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Old 09-21-05, 07:21 AM   #7
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Told you on aim already but I'll say it again...

I'm definitely feeling the beat and I feel ya dropped some hotness on it. Your flow was suited for this type of song, you be spitting fast yet it's not hard to understand you. Sometimes when people spit fast they rush their words and some things are hard to understand but you kept a nice balance. Your presence was good especially knowing this isn't your favorite type of track. Lyrics were nice, it's quite catchy actually, sticks to the head...

And you know what I told you...truth...nothing else...
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Old 09-21-05, 10:26 AM   #8
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Beats nice...flow is cool...lyrics deffo club type but they aight...delivery is aight...quality wise it's cool as well...you done ya thing girl nice track the fast flow bit was aight too...nice shit
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Old 09-21-05, 11:21 AM   #9
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midwest in the house!!...

ya delivery is definately hot....voice is grimey
flow is different from i've heard...tahts good though...
content is str8 club...kew though...yu got that bold style going..'put my foot in ya ass' type
on a technical aspect:...ya sound quality was onpoint...good mixing ma...in sum spots ya dubs were a lil off...they didnt mesh well enough...ya levels were good...

overall:...hot track...i wanna hear the whole thing...it'll be a banger...
shorti spit taht hot fiyah!!....
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Old 09-21-05, 12:21 PM   #10
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yo girl wots up not spoke to you in ages, anyway

nice lady, very nice

love the beat, its quick and suits your style perfectly, lyrics are fire, I thought near the begin the flow went slightly but apart from that it on point, love the ending and the way you came in, very gud return track girl like it alot

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Old 09-21-05, 01:32 PM   #11
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Good shit nigga freall...i mos def see da change since ive peeped everything u do..for some reason you fit all ur words into the beat and it fits perfect u gettin it girl u doin ya thing on this shit..i would like to get on some collab type shit tho wit you artik n LV..should be some dope shit.
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Old 09-21-05, 03:59 PM   #12
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you sound like a baby version of EVE wit throat cancer.......

beat was aight.... flow..... sloppy...........


delivery... forced


theres your break down hoe......



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Old 09-21-05, 04:00 PM   #13
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you sound like a baby version of EVE wit throat cancer.......

beat was aight.... flow..... sloppy...........


delivery... forced


theres your break down hoe......



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Old 09-21-05, 04:04 PM   #14
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yea nice shit I was feelin ya verse
I like ya rap style. and how you flowed to that beat. Nice grimy lyrics ma good shit keep it up.

can you leave some feed on this
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205666
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Old 09-21-05, 04:05 PM   #15
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liked this it was nice u got some skillz ma!i liked the beat especially and the way u spit it all out!holla back but i really did like this!
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