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Forum: Closed
02-14-05, 05:37 PM
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Replies: 1,073
Views: 15,791
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Blackstone
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Forum: Closed
02-11-05, 03:31 PM
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Replies: 1,073
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Forum: Closed
02-11-05, 03:06 PM
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Replies: 210
Views: 11,077
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Blackstone
Devils corruption
Exiled from heavens glory, and abased to earths bleakness/ his hatred is manifest as temptations to human weakness/ each entrapment of sin drawing millions closer to death/ his only satisfactions not... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-11-05, 02:32 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 324
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Blackstone
i thought the concept was cool the rhymes were...
i thought the concept was cool the rhymes were tight the only thing i didn't like was the raps in the bible with a curse word in the same line seemed kinda hypcritical like kanye west. the rest of it... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-07-05, 04:04 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 280
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Blackstone
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-04-05, 04:25 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 157
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Blackstone
some lines were too short and some were too long...
some lines were too short and some were too long your punches were good but the flow was kinda scattered at places all around good verses though. Lyrics |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-04-05, 04:10 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 280
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Blackstone
Lyrics
My lyrics were born to take a physical form/ this ain't ya average poem i grab a mic and do harm/ I'm like a poisonous drug when i'm reciting i pour/ lyrics like venom escape the mic chords/ causing... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-04-05, 03:58 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 122
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Blackstone
use // at the end of your rhymes to make it...
use // at the end of your rhymes to make it easier to catch the flow other then that it was straight. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-04-05, 03:55 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 128
Posted By
Blackstone
its ok for the first time but you may need to...
its ok for the first time but you may need to work on your vocab a little because it came off just alittle weak so keep writing and you will improve |
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