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Forum: Textual Releases
10-05-06, 03:15 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 385
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-04-06, 10:06 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 556
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LADY_LYRICAL
Truth = NEEDIN FEEDBKIVE DUN A FEW LINES BUT BEFORE I CREATE THE FULL SONG TO IT I JUS WANT SOME FEED ON HOW IS GOIN SO FAR AN HOW TO IMPROVE, TY Truth Beneath motionless expressions, see these eyes burn with... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
03-04-06, 09:53 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 539
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-23-06, 07:46 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 673
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-18-06, 02:39 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 673
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ty thnx bro, ....... gud feed, ive never red ur...
ty thnx bro, ....... gud feed, ive never red ur flows, but ima chek em soon ,, yer i agree,,,, needs mor mets... i dint want this to b too poetic so i agree wit u ther ty agen |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-18-06, 02:37 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 539
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LADY_LYRICAL
ty bro..... yer i rushed this piece coz my...
ty bro..... yer i rushed this piece coz my original lines,,,,got destroyed so i lost the verses,,,an had to re-write the whole thin .......came out rushed |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-06, 03:43 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 726
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LADY_LYRICAL
this was a deep pieace with gud use of volcab and...
this was a deep pieace with gud use of volcab and rhyme words,,,, structure was pretty gud and topik was deep keep elevatin 1 |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-06, 03:41 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 673
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222439 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2661096&posted=1#post2661096 |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-06, 10:10 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 673
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LADY_LYRICAL
Lady Lyrical - Notorius killerz TaleNOTORIUS KILLAZ TALE Blade lifted steadily from the cold corroding concrete Dressed in black, demons coercing the mind to be discreet As I make ma way to a new day, killing displays my intention A... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-06, 10:07 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 530
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LADY_LYRICAL
lool was tht aimin @ me................... yer...
lool was tht aimin @ me................... yer this piece was gud still |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-17-06, 10:04 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 539
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LADY_LYRICAL
tnx for feed most appriciated,,,lool yer ill...
tnx for feed most appriciated,,,lool yer ill leave better feed nex tym |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-16-06, 08:38 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 539
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LADY_LYRICAL
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222347 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222325 |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-16-06, 08:37 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 539
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LADY_LYRICAL
Lady Lyrical - Dear GodDear god open to all comments........ jus say y u hated it or liked it and improvementz......ty [Verse 1] If I still wrote this letter, would you take it from my heart My emotions keep on growin... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-16-06, 08:30 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 791
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LADY_LYRICAL
yep,, this piece was deep and creative,,...
yep,, this piece was deep and creative,, everything put together nicely..... heavens demon and tech skillz rap this up nicely keep elevatin...... :) |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-16-06, 08:27 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 575
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LADY_LYRICAL
... 1st thing i got to say is that ur piece was...
... 1st thing i got to say is that ur piece was hot no doubt, had flow,imegry,structure,meanin,purpose and the content was kept fluent throughout..this piece did not jump about and was striaght to... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-06-06, 05:04 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 575
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LADY_LYRICAL
yer i liked this piece,,, flowed nicely,,,as...
yer i liked this piece,,, flowed nicely,,,as mentioned above ^^ the hook was creativ therefore catchy need a bit mor higher volcab use overall yer ...liked it xcept one thing........... we mor need... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-06-06, 04:53 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,327
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nah this wernt wak at all, gud use of multi's...
nah this wernt wak at all, gud use of multi's which ran smoothly, catchy str8 to point hook, didnt go outta topik, formal structure,gud use of volcab yep...uppin this for a 8.9 keep elevatin |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-05-06, 10:36 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 278
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LADY_LYRICAL
gud drop - keep elevatin
good use of...
gud drop - keep elevatin good use of volcab flowed smoothli had some nice multis in ther made sense vision depicted clearli uppin this for a 9.7 |
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Forum: Diss Tracks
02-05-06, 10:17 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 687
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LADY_LYRICAL
this is hott,,,,,, for a battle ...keep...
this is hott,,,,,, for a battle ...keep rhymin chuk in sum deep lyrics |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-05-06, 10:04 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 371
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LADY_LYRICAL
nah,,, as a bttle spit, this wud b hot
his deep...
nah,,, as a bttle spit, this wud b hot his deep rhymes r nyc....... grims post sum deep rhymes innit |
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Forum: Textual Releases
02-05-06, 09:59 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,242
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LADY_LYRICAL
dam gurllll, this is hot for a 15 year old,,,,,,...
dam gurllll, this is hot for a 15 year old,,,,,, keep elevatin |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-12-05, 03:43 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 338
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LADY_LYRICAL
this is pretty good, topik is deep n no, bullshit...
this is pretty good, topik is deep n no, bullshit tech -9 rhymes ... i think try to b mor creative in the lines swap n switch words around wid mor emotive ones rather than 'sad / tragik ... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-12-05, 03:36 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 542
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LADY_LYRICAL
yea... this was a good piece 9.98/10
the onli...
yea... this was a good piece 9.98/10 the onli tinz i gotta problem wid iz those HOES !!!!! lak of respect to the real women out ther !!!!!!!! |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-12-05, 03:28 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 1,077
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LADY_LYRICAL
this was off the hook
now wht im feelin the most...
this was off the hook now wht im feelin the most is the way you set up the verses i.e ''the streets watchin etc.'' it rhymed fluently n'd volcabulary was up to a gud standard but cud do with mor... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
10-12-05, 03:20 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 381
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LADY_LYRICAL
yeh agree with the rest, deep meaning , structure...
yeh agree with the rest, deep meaning , structure pretty decent flow = very deep - 9 (1/2) keep droppin ~1~ |
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