iight yo check it....


Your stressing me is of no fucking use
trynna game me?...bitch u so fucking loose
this anger developes in my own silence
dont make me own ya,cos den it gon be violence
i got alot of memories on how u made me cry
but i'ma make 'em old stories...xcept u wanna die
how dare you ask a whole me for a lil respect
when u know i'ld say FUCK U without ant regrets?
expect "the heavens" call....till u pay u fucking debth!
n i wanna give u a taste of my pinky glock
then tell me how it feels to c ur blood pop
cos therre aint NO PEACE till i pull a fucking shot

if you looking for a dick to ryde....herre..catch d fucking mic
thought i cant spit tight,but u wish u were my type
i keep flowing as fast like a ride,its iight u take a flight
cos i'ma make u know this aint a dyke & i eat w/e's ripe
for 6 years you werent present in my life
and now u want me to love ya..u know shit aint right
you'ld never reach my height cos u a bitch that cant even bite
if you wanna spet tight,grab a pen and start to write
im like a fire and on me u just a cube of ice
i'll grind u into pieces...like tiny grains of rice
cos im black and i can fight,and u wack cos u white...thats right

RIDE = WHIP.....a whip....a car (for who dosent know)

BITCH = THE FEMALE DOG....not bitch as we all always intend



Note : i came up with this verse listening to "act a fool" of master p...i tryed rapping it to that beat and i swear it comes out tight...but anyhow...y'all tell me what ya fink...


holla


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nice lil drop yvonne who were u tlkn bout in it though or were u tlkn of no one?
u gettin betta like i said u would n im proud of u.....u wanted 2 give up but i told u n told u keep practicin u'll get betta...arent u glad u listened?miss ya holla back peace

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lol yeah thanx....

actually i was talking bout my mum and a bitch...i kinna mixed it up cos i wrote donw things as they came to my mind....


thanx anyways


uppin for more feed bax...


holla!!

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Damn...that was intense...I need a womanlike you by my side...shit you got more anger than 16 republicans in a democratic convention!!

I like that shit!!!!

keep on writin ma...you got somethan called talent!!

thanx

who knows y i aint never gd in battles....hmmmm...o well



uppin

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i checked out ur first battle thing u aight i say
any way i gota go battle
remember ma name im seeken fame
check ma first battle out when i do aight

peace.

errrr..........ok but on herre u was to give a feedback on the verses i droped...lol o well

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yo that shit was tight, it is about time gurls start to become good at this shit~

word..........











uppin for more peeps.............







critiques are welcomed too








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girl dat was a sick spit, do dat sh!t in ya battlez....ud kick ass girl.

yo baby sik drop deff got sum sik skillz, just don't do what most people get caught up in which is so much form and context, just keep that in mind, check any of my battles and see no context, yet everyone get's served.
keep it up...
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Daaaaamn, That Was DOPE...I Was Really Feelin Ya Frustration In Ya Lyrics, Loved The Drop...
Keep Em Comin BabyGirl..

P E A C E

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thanx y'all....

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just uppin this

*while i think of sometelse to drop next*

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