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Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-25-03, 11:52 PM

Replies: 6 They ask Views: 162 Posted By blyndedsoul yea u def should post the rest..it will prob make... yea u def should post the rest..it will prob make all the diff...like i said im willin to help anyway i can...and it really was a good piece i read it a second time and i liked it alil more..so maybe...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-25-03, 11:45 PM

Replies: 5 [ I n S i D e ] Views: 175 Posted By blyndedsoul o and i see where phantasia is comin from where... o and i see where phantasia is comin from where its only for the person u wrote it for but i dont neccessarily agree that was a nice piece.. and it had some deep lines "Thought of you, sudden rush,...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-25-03, 11:42 PM

Replies: 5 [ I n S i D e ] Views: 175 Posted By blyndedsoul I KNO THE FEELIN I DEF CAN RELATE TO THIS... I KNO THE FEELIN I DEF CAN RELATE TO THIS SHIT..short and simple but sweet sweet i loved only vice i can give is if u tryna elevate u could work on poetic qualities NICE PIECE THO..keep it up..

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-25-03, 11:38 PM

Replies: 6 They ask Views: 162 Posted By blyndedsoul that was a nice piece..but honestly a little too... that was a nice piece..but honestly a little too simple ...it could use some work on structure vocab and adding some poetic forms wouldnt be too bad either it was nice and creative the way u did they...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-25-03, 11:21 PM

Replies: 5 reality(peep this) Views: 266 Posted By blyndedsoul i figured i could give this one last... i figured i could give this one last chance...please say suttin anyhting to my girll..and thanks filed..

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-25-03, 10:51 PM

Replies: 33 trapped (please dont sleep) Views: 1,449 Posted By blyndedsoul yea surprise..kid got skills too...well thanks... yea surprise..kid got skills too...well thanks erryone for the vice..ill work on it to keep elevatin..

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-23-03, 11:42 PM

Replies: 8 Suicidal Stess Views: 234 Posted By blyndedsoul I REALLY LIKE UR WORK..so true about suicidal... I REALLY LIKE UR WORK..so true about suicidal issues too..esp about getting ignored..people sometimes feel like this is the only they will ever get attention and then its over i really felt word for...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-23-03, 03:29 PM

Replies: 15 Soft Focus: The Weathers Art Views: 506 Posted By blyndedsoul all i really can say about this is DAAAAMMN that... all i really can say about this is DAAAAMMN that was the best thing i have ever read from you..and you chose a topic to write on that was so unusual atleast for me ive never seen anyone be able to...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-23-03, 02:45 PM

Replies: 4 ~First Post~..Here.. Views: 125 Posted By blyndedsoul this was a good piece..i had to read it twice to... this was a good piece..i had to read it twice to really understand but it wouldnt be poetry without a deep outlook..i dont have much advice caws i cant picture it being written any diff..keep up the...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-23-03, 02:25 PM

Replies: 5 reality(peep this) Views: 266 Posted By blyndedsoul UPPIN...GIVE SUTTIN... UPPIN...GIVE SUTTIN...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-22-03, 07:48 PM

Replies: 11 Poll: tears for a minute Views: 231 Posted By blyndedsoul THANKS FOR ALL THE FEEDBACK THANKS FOR ALL THE FEEDBACK

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-21-03, 11:23 AM

Replies: 11 Young Child-Sucidal Views: 154 Posted By blyndedsoul it aint a bad piece...i've seen this kinda thing... it aint a bad piece...i've seen this kinda thing done before but it aint a bad piece..it was nice and i could see it happenin so therefore you kept me interested but a few things could be approved...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-21-03, 11:19 AM

Replies: 5 reality(peep this) Views: 266 Posted By blyndedsoul this has been looked at 20 times and no one has... this has been looked at 20 times and no one has said shit yall come on give my girl some respect it aint a bad piece..

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-19-03, 01:13 PM

Replies: 5 reality(peep this) Views: 266 Posted By blyndedsoul uppin this is a nice piece..yall dont sleep uppin this is a nice piece..yall dont sleep

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-18-03, 10:09 PM

Replies: 5 reality(peep this) Views: 266 Posted By blyndedsoul sinking into reality(peep this) this was written by one of my good friends and i really wanted it to be shared and get some feedback its long but worth readin ..so give her sum advice this is the first time her shit has been...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-18-03, 09:48 PM

Replies: 12 Fairy tale Views: 262 Posted By blyndedsoul give it time its only been up here today its good... give it time its only been up here today its good peeps will check it and catchy title ....hey peep my stuff if ya get a chance..thanks..

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-18-03, 09:44 PM

Replies: 8 the mind of a teenage boy Views: 515 Posted By blyndedsoul this should not be slept on i like this awhole... this should not be slept on i like this awhole lot..i saw his face before my eyes too when i was reading good imagery and nice structure keep it up kid..maybe rethink the title to suttin to catch...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-18-03, 09:40 PM

Replies: 12 Fairy tale Views: 262 Posted By blyndedsoul u kno what im gonna say..i likes awhole lot soo... u kno what im gonna say..i likes awhole lot soo true and its amazing how the fairy tales dissentigrate and reality develops it hurts but i really like this kid..keep it up i rally have no suggestions...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-18-03, 09:37 PM

Replies: 3 Love Sick Views: 186 Posted By blyndedsoul umm this was nice..it was straight to the point... umm this was nice..it was straight to the point strictly displayin ya feelings i liked it..maybe could be elevated on a few things but ima newbie so i dont wanna be deliverin suggestions i dont own.....

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-18-03, 04:07 PM

Replies: 11 Poll: tears for a minute Views: 231 Posted By blyndedsoul thanks..come on dont sleep..anyone else?? and... thanks..come on dont sleep..anyone else?? and could someone please answer if i should add more to it or leave it short thanks...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-17-03, 08:02 PM

Replies: 11 Poll: tears for a minute Views: 231 Posted By blyndedsoul ... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=98821 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=94145 ...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-17-03, 07:54 PM

Replies: 6 stumbling on emotions Views: 161 Posted By blyndedsoul i like the way the 1st person put it an emotional... i like the way the 1st person put it an emotional dead end took the words right out my mouth...it does seem as tho its that way..and maybe the poem ended like that because you yourself moved on...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-17-03, 07:46 PM

Replies: 14 Son Of The Mourning Views: 268 Posted By blyndedsoul i really like this poem..everything i would say... i really like this poem..everything i would say was pretty well summed up by the other replies but one thing i would like to add is this kinda thing IS SO TRUE... i love the way ur visions were so...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-17-03, 07:35 PM

Replies: 11 My scars are novels.. Views: 198 Posted By blyndedsoul 4 real i liked this piece tho short and simple it... 4 real i liked this piece tho short and simple it was nice..may be just me but i saw alot of symbolization in here maybe struggling with your innerself not sure thats just the way i perceived...

Forum: Poetic Scriptures 12-16-03, 10:08 PM

Replies: 11 Poll: tears for a minute Views: 231 Posted By blyndedsoul tears for a minute this is just something i wrote today, to cool myself off and i just wanted some feedback on it..nothin too special.... TEARS FOR A MINUTE the tears only drop down from my eye...

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