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08-02-04, 12:51 AM
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Redemption
IP: 39C2 8F9E
I'm drunk right now, so I'ma see how this works.
Verse 1 I'm drunk, my speech is slurrin', vision blurrin'/ Swervin' the Suburban, 'bout to crash up on the curb and/ Then I'ma bail out, prolly fall on my ass/ Need a hard awakening, hope I don't fall in the grass/ 'Cuz if I'm not on feet I better feel concrete/ Under my seat, 'cuz the alcoholism is now beyond me/ It makes me feel good but inside it hurts/ Sometimes I wish I got caught stealin' out my mother's purse/ I'm a chronic drinker, chronic smoker, smokin' chronic/ My daily water breaks consist of a gin and tonic/ But honest, I'm feindin' for liquor/ Beer, vodka, whiskey, whatever'll fuck me up quicker/ This shit's made me bitter, you don't see my old smile/ A true Cubs fan, that's why I always stock up on Old Style/ It's so wild, livin' in the fast lane/ Hope I crash or get pulled over and god tickets my ass, mane(man)/ Uppin' for feedback, gimme what you got. Vote for my battle in front lines against avanish. Peace
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08-02-04, 06:37 AM
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$Thug Life$
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IP: 0F10 5916
coo nigga right now im giving feed back so check ma shit
peace
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Hot Songz
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08-02-04, 08:43 PM
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Uppin' for more feedback.
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If you consider 4/20 a holiday, you probably smoke more crack than weed.
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08-02-04, 09:21 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4391 3AD8
damn! thats all I can fuckin say right now! Damn! flowed perfectly, nice vocab, and an overall excellent drop homeboy!! 9/10 beautiful
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08-02-04, 10:08 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
haha thanks a lot man, 'preciate it. anybody else got some opinions i'm still uppin' for feedback. holla at ya boy.
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If you consider 4/20 a holiday, you probably smoke more crack than weed.
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PS, no Sony. |
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08-04-04, 09:22 PM
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Uppin'...Gimme some opinions on this or check my other posts:
Inevitable Admiration Drop an honest vote, gimme a link and I'll return the favor. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139283 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138907
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If you consider 4/20 a holiday, you probably smoke more crack than weed.
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PS, no Sony. |
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08-04-04, 11:29 PM
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IP: C2FE 1710
hey man, nice drop...had a good flow
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08-05-04, 09:18 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Thanks, still uppin' for feedback folks, hit me up.
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If you consider 4/20 a holiday, you probably smoke more crack than weed.
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PS, no Sony. |
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08-06-04, 04:53 PM
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fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 8480 AFAA
good i see u got sum skillz holla back n hit my shit up-neva new it would turn dis way-new shit wit me n emerginmc07 holla back peace nice drop again holla
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08-07-04, 03:03 PM
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Thanks bro, uppin'...
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08-07-04, 06:59 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 02C5 0D6C
was good...bein drunk u are good wit typin...i kno i cant type for shit wen i am drunk...haha...my only sugestion is try not to end a line wit and...to me it would be difficult to spit a verse that ended wit and...other than that...good shit...
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