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Forum: Textual Releases
02-01-04, 10:30 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 257
Posted By
Gene Pool
I thought it was an alright read in my opinion...
I thought it was an alright read in my opinion though I'd say u could do alot better if u took more time with it and I can say that I can sorta relate to this so I thought your imagery was good and u... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-29-04, 08:01 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 149
Posted By
Gene Pool
Corrupted Visions: Down to Earth
hey peeps I wrote this piece a few weeks back and I'm juss droppin it now so tell me what u all think muchly appreciated thanx in advance. peace. flowin to - Good Times (sick pimpin) by... |
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Forum: Closed
01-21-04, 06:43 PM
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Replies: 175
Views: 5,668
Posted By
Gene Pool
shady politics and gangsta flicks? man I say fuck...
shady politics and gangsta flicks? man I say fuck shady flicks and gangsta politics/ cuz everyone be known that I'm the real motha fucka who be down with this shit/ cuz bitches drop on spot to suck... |
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Forum: Hip-Hop Talk Archives
01-21-04, 05:34 PM
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Replies: 31
Views: 512
Posted By
Gene Pool
paparazzi
symphony in X major
3 card molly
don't...
paparazzi symphony in X major 3 card molly don't approach me etc. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-21-04, 05:02 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 459
Posted By
Gene Pool
yo uppin this one last time to hopefully get some...
yo uppin this one last time to hopefully get some more feedback so come on ppl leave some feedback plz. leave a link to one of your open mics and I'll ihit it up in return peace. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-21-04, 05:00 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 431
Posted By
Gene Pool
I agree with penskills and Edicius I have seen...
I agree with penskills and Edicius I have seen better writtens from u and your imagery did seem like it was forced, not that this wasn't a good piece or anything but this type of topic isn't really... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-20-04, 12:59 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 459
Posted By
Gene Pool
uppin this for some more feedback keep it comin...
uppin this for some more feedback keep it comin ppl and thanx for all the feedback so far. leave a link to one of your open mics and I'll mkae sure to hit it up in return. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-19-04, 03:13 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 216
Posted By
Gene Pool
yo man some really good wordplay in this, I found...
yo man some really good wordplay in this, I found the flow was a bit hard to follow in a couple spots though but u had some good vocab and multi's which made up for it, your sturcture was kinda mixed... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-19-04, 03:05 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 459
Posted By
Gene Pool
finally it's about time we get a reply in here...
finally it's about time we get a reply in here and thank u very much for the feed so ppl lets keep it comin muchly appreciated. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-19-04, 03:04 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 295
Posted By
Gene Pool
yo man a shit load of nice fuckin lines in this...
yo man a shit load of nice fuckin lines in this piece, very sickly ill use of vocab and wordplay although your first verse I thought had to many big words in it took away from the flow but as for the... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-19-04, 02:56 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 175
Posted By
Gene Pool
yo bro some sick shit like LA said alot of...
yo bro some sick shit like LA said alot of rythmic words and lines in this piece and I know for a fact this would flow nicely on audio but ya had some really good wordplay in here very good job on... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-19-04, 02:51 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 143
Posted By
Gene Pool
yo nice shit bro, basic, deep and simple, flow...
yo nice shit bro, basic, deep and simple, flow was tight but proply coulda used a lil more vocab but your wordplay and multi's made up for that and I really like the closing line really finished the... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-19-04, 01:36 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 459
Posted By
Gene Pool
come on ppl!!! don't sleep on this leave some...
come on ppl!!! don't sleep on this leave some freakin feedback. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-18-04, 10:12 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 459
Posted By
Gene Pool
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPIIIINNNN come on ppl keep...
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPIIIINNNN come on ppl keep the feedback comin. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-17-04, 11:48 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 238
Posted By
Gene Pool
yo man some good shit, nice to see u back again...
yo man some good shit, nice to see u back again and in the game bro. but anyways your flow was good and some extremely good content in here, vocab and wordplay was dope to and it's good to see... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-17-04, 11:36 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 390
Posted By
Gene Pool
some deep shit man. u stayed on point and your...
some deep shit man. u stayed on point and your flow was tight very well structured rhyme scheme here as well, some decent wordplay and good use of vocab and some nice multi's made this piece stand... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-17-04, 11:32 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 459
Posted By
Gene Pool
yo ppl uppin this for some more feedback keep it...
yo ppl uppin this for some more feedback keep it comin ppl. and thanx for all the feedback so far. |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-15-04, 11:34 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 205
Posted By
Gene Pool
we all know realist could do better but obviously...
we all know realist could do better but obviously he juss wanted to keep this simple. but yea at least the name of this pieve ain't misleading. simple and short. was good I guess but I've definetly... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-15-04, 11:16 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 198
Posted By
Gene Pool
lotsa nice multi's man but your flow was a lil...
lotsa nice multi's man but your flow was a lil choppy found it kinda hard to read, structure needs imporvement to but good content for sure and some impressive vocab. but yea juss work on your... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-15-04, 11:05 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 160
Posted By
Gene Pool
yo man I say the same thing as High Class, u do...
yo man I say the same thing as High Class, u do got a good thing goin here but it needs some hard work done to it and I think u could really make somethin out of it, so basically all I can really do... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-15-04, 10:51 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 459
Posted By
Gene Pool
Stories of Old ft. Yaz [A MUST READ PLZ LEAVE FEEDBACK!!!!]
yes ppl I know it's fuckin long but if u could read through it and leave some honest feedback it would be extremely appreciated we both spent quite alot of time and thought in putting this together.... |
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Forum: Closed
01-15-04, 03:09 PM
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Replies: 138
Views: 5,790
Posted By
Gene Pool
Saving the days, to take away all pain/
Tensions...
Saving the days, to take away all pain/ Tensions driving us to act insane/ Undoings of evil, changes to good/ Ventilating hatred throughout the hoods/ Whether it's a win or lose situation/ X-fering... |
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Forum: Closed
01-15-04, 02:58 PM
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Replies: 175
Views: 5,668
Posted By
Gene Pool
here it is, wish number one, a gun, full clips...
here it is, wish number one, a gun, full clips and rows of punks/ what? come on everyone has to have a little bit a fun/ but anywas, I take the glock, and shock when u hear it cock/ then click click,... |
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Forum: Textual Releases
01-15-04, 02:49 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 525
Posted By
Gene Pool
yo bro I like. had some good flow and some...
yo bro I like. had some good flow and some alright multi's could maybe use some more vocab though but other then that it was down. |
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Forum: Closed
01-14-04, 12:59 AM
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Replies: 175
Views: 5,668
Posted By
Gene Pool
man gay ass topic. so I'ma do the topic before...
man gay ass topic. so I'ma do the topic before cuz their ain't no fuckin way I'm gonna pull a fuckin nelly up in here. guns an crews, juss stick to boot and stick the shoe/ in that fool's asshole... |
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